Thursday, 15 September 2016

Magnus the Magnificent narrative writing

Magnus the Magnificent

Once upon a time there was a boy named Magnus. He lived in a town named Springfield with his mum and dad. Magnus is the only child. Magnus is an handsome young man that loved playing with his ninja stars and his large swords. At 12 am thursday the 2nd of August magnus was famous for killing a minotaur that was trying to destroying his home town . He got millions of money but instead of using the money to himself . He gave it to his family and to pay the bill for his big house. Every time magnus went out Magnus got called magnus the magnificent he would smile then start taking photos with them.

Magnus the magnificent had photos of him on the web, billboards, taxis, and houses. 1 week later he found emails on his laptop that had good news.

Magnus had the opportunity to meet Queen Elizabeth, The first family, the 2015 and 2016 nba winners the cleveland cavaliers, golden state warriors and even meet the famous Mr Wiseman. Magnus decided to go to mr wiseman because he is more famous from the others. Magnus got first class to see Mr Wiseman. Mr wiseman lives in hawaii with his wife and daughter. He is very famous for bringing back the olympics in 2016.

When Magnus got to hawaii Mr wiseman yelled out Magnus! Magnus! Come quick, Magnus was confused Mr wiseman was wise he called Magnus just on time. Magnus ask what's the problem
There is 1 minotaur and he wanted you. They forced me to called you our else or else said magnus
I’ll die.
Good thing you called me SO WHERE IS THE 1 MINOTAUR! He is at honolulu

Magnus had to put on his ninja suit, take out his two swords to attach to his back and his 10 ninja stars. Magnus left, He went to honolulu the minotaurs name is franky the franktastic. Franky is the best minotaur in the world. Magnus had to go because he’s was gonna destroy hawaii and he was the hardest and he was the brother that destroyed springfield. When Magnus got there He spotted franky he was in the sea waiting for him to come. As magnus came over the minotaur saw him running with his swords.

The minotaur grabbed the two swords and threw it away. Magnus was not scared she ran and threw punches but the franky blocked it. All of a sudden Franky pull out a gun and started shooting. Magnus dove under water and started thinking. She was thinking about how could she take franky down then she got the idea. She quickly jumped out of water and grabbed his ninja stars and starts throwing them it went thru the heart and out of the back. Magnus had killed another minotaur. And then magnus and the people in honolulu and even mr wiseman and his family lived happily ever after The End.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Judah I really like your Magnus the magnificent Narrative writing it is really cool. Keep up the good work